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Trying this out

10 Years Ago


Hello,

I've been writing for fun and wanted to get some feedback so I could get better. Here is a poem I wrote called "Cipher":

Decipher the world.
Encipher it again
WIth all your whims and wants.
Once you know what you desire
Sift it out from amongst the waste
Discard the filth
And enjoy your newfound treasure.
Experience it all.
Make it your own - but then
Release it to the world once more
As your emissary.
It takes the best of you
and scatters into the abyss.
Exert control on the world
By existing beyond yourself.

Anyway, just hoping to get in on the mutual review fun. I promise I'll jump in and start reviewing soon!