Write = Get Reviews Forum Oh My God!

Please, if you would, take the time to review a little of what I've written. The whole story is in my head, should I keep writing it out as I go or stop and delete it now and try something else?

continue with it... finish it up. THEN go back over it and fix the jumpiness. It's got a hook... just needs cleaned up a bit. Turn the internal editor OFF and type... until it's done. My 2 cents.

Give me a week to defrag this story (polish it up) and the story Oh My God will be ready.
P.S.... It's completed, so it's all there.