Write = Get Reviews Forum New here, story I wrote(experi..

Hey all! I'm new to this site. I kind of wrote a very iffy, experimental work that I wasn't really sure about sharing with friends, but I didn't want the story to go to waste so I posted it here. I still would like some feed back though(and I'm of course happy to read some other people's stories too!).
The story can be found here.

This is a story about a girl who is asexual(not sexually attracted to anyone), but becomes curious about sexual activities. It's a very adult read and isn't for everyone, but hopefully some will like it.
If you read it, let me know what you think.