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Isabel Bishop

Death Before Life, a tale of Anorexia 10 Years Ago “We all hold things inside us that no one else can see. They weigh us down like anchors, and drown us out at sea.”  Dried sunflower petals, withered and fallen. Wilted and dead. While no one would argue that they might have once held great beauty; by the time they are deprived of nutrients, water, and sunlight they become shriveled remains of what used to be. The beauty that was once seen during a drive on a long stretch of dirt road in August; when you pass a field filled with row upon row, their beautiful golden petals reaching out to the sun to gather all the sunlight they could possibly hold. --this is a small excerpt from my book I am in the process of writing. I would love to know if it is interesting/good/garbage... Thoughts/ suggestions, what would improve it thus far! Please just take a few minutes to read a chapter or two and let me know! I will return any review!