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People change like weather

10 Years Ago


When you first meet that person everything seems bright,

  The sky is bluer than ever,the ocean is deeper than ever;

  The cold breeze washes up your face and take you worries just like a roller coaster rush,

   Your body feels numb,you lose your soul to them and let down your self-esteem

     ego becomes a word that somehow got misplaced in your dictionary 

     the lip gloss smile seems truthful as ever ,all you fail to realize is just like weather people have 
        the ability to change;

      when they leave ,you break down, its like your blood all around ,you on the damp cold ground 

      shivering in cold,asking for mercy,the addiction the lust all of it vanishes in a single blow

      and all you can remember is the time they first made you smile your happiest smile ..   

Re: People change like weather

10 Years Ago


i Like it very effective and deep. i would go deeper though extend it a bit more. The poem seems unfinished.