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HI, been a while since I've been on here. Busy refining and holding down my regular day job. Anyway, a lot of people seem to read my work but don't leave any reviews. I assume its because they don't like my work but if they don't say anything how do I know how to improve. I'd appreciate it greatly if you could review my work, any tips for improvement would be good. I promise to return the favour. Thanks fellow writers. Karen