Write = Get Reviews Forum Need Reviews for Journeys!!!

I'm Momo, and I'm somewhat new to WritersCafe! If possible, could you please read and review as much as you would like of my story: Journeys: A Saga- The Travels of Maris Varroue? I'm not looking for corrections on grammar, I want more plot and character-oriented reviews!  Here is the link:

I can't wait to read what you guys have to say! Enjoy!

~Momo