Write = Get Reviews Forum Need reviews please

I have started writing a serial horror story and I would love feedback and advice on it. Thank you kindly :)

Oh Great dude! I would love to R4R (review for review) with you. I am writing a horror series too! Maybe we could help each other out eh? Please post your response.

Okay dude reviewed,and I thought it was pretty good. Could you review a few of mine. I'll review a few of yours. I really need these 4 stories reviewed. The 4 are Glorified Killer, or Hero prt.1-4. I'd love it if you did! =)

would be glad to do review for a review