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I only have a few reviews. All of my friends on the site seem to be getting loads of reviews! I don't get hardly any ever! I've even joined a group where you can get reviews, nothing!

Hi , I would appreciate if anyone could take out time to review my short story- 

Hi , I would appreciate if you could take out time to review my short story- 

Hi , I would appreciate if you could take out time to review my short story- 

I would be more than happy to read and/or review your stories in exchange! Liar and Shadowed is the first of my two books, and Instrument of Wrath is still being written and is largely unedited.

Angels and Demons seems an appropriate place to start looking, but I will be posting the same desperate plea in a couple of other places! *laughs*

Feel free to let me know if you want me to read or review your work in exchange!

Thanks!
Numidia

I would be more than happy to read and/or review your stories in exchange! Liar and Shadowed is the first of my two books, and Instrument of Wrath is still being written and is largely unedited.

They are fantasy stories with Angels, Demons, and magic. They do have some rather adult parts here and there, so they are listed as mature.

Feel free to let me know if you want me to read or review your work in exchange!

Thanks!
Numidia

I would be more than happy to read and/or review your stories in exchange! Liar and Shadowed is the first of my two books, and Instrument of Wrath is still being written and is largely unedited.

They are fantasy stories with Angels, Demons, and magic. They do have some rather adult parts here and there, so they are listed as mature. Liar and Shadowed is novel length (broken into reasonable chapters), and I'm not expecting anyone to sit and read it straight through, but I would love feedback on what I'm doing wrong or what I'm doing right with anything you feel like commenting on.

Feel free to let me know if you want me to read or review your work in exchange!

Thanks!
Numidia

I would really love to have some readers and/or reviewers take a look at Liar and Shadowed:

It's novel length, so I wouldn't expect anything fast, and it also has some rather adult parts that you may want to take into consideration before you get started.

I would be more than willing to read and/or review your stories in exchange if you'd like me to!

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So does it matter if i do this in story form.

if it possible to do this in a book set that has just started id like somehelp and opinions if u dont mind

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