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Critique

15 Years Ago


Can some people please review my poem, "Velocity of Dark Thoughts"? I need serious critique on that one...please?

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15 Years Ago


Yes, ma'am. : )

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15 Years Ago


Hah, I almost forgot about that poem! It was ages ago...and yes, now re-reading it, it was...ah...we'll just say not my best. ;) I was wondering where and why you dug it up!! Thanks for the review, anyhow. Always good to hear from another writer.