Underground Writers Network Forum New Work

I just finished editing and finalizing my newest story, The Many Sides of Beauty. Please, let me know what you think everyone. Creative criticism is a good thing, but please, be honest. You can find it here in the literature section or on my profile page.

I would suggest you to post the story here, paste it, so that you can get comments. People are more likely to read what is here already than if the have to look for it. You could include the url if you don't want to copy it into the forum. ;)