Underground Writers Network : Forum : Challenge of the Week - #6


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18 Years Ago


Oh I'm voting for Pelelope's "De Mob". I think it has all 3 of the challenge elements and I like it! Ah, I can just envision Piglet�s doing the gansta boogie as I write. ;-)

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18 Years Ago


I have had the pleasure of reading the others who have submitted their work for this contest. I must say I was amazed and happy with the results and the talent of each individual piece. It was hard to use a list of 101 words and cram them all into 150 word piece! lol. If I could I would crown you all, because you all did a great job. But I must choose only one. I have made my choice based on the 3 rules Valerie gave:

1.) Message
2.) Amount of words from list.
3.) Compliance with word usage.


I feel Ghetto Fabuluos Marines did just that. My vote is for James. His message stood out the most with me.

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18 Years Ago


My vote goes to Mr. Yesterday because the poem was "awesome" and it inspired me to take up the challenge. Well done!

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18 Years Ago


Is it to late to give my piece. I just joined today. I wrote 118 words and only 16 of the words. I have to say it was pretty hard but defiantly fun to be able to stretch my mind to include these words and still have the poem sound good. I wouldn't say this is my best work though. I gave it a shot.

The Year Book

Computer class, double click.
Shoot or dunk, take your pick.
The cafeteria, an interesting scene,
teenagers mill in amazing variety.
Eggheads in the corner, by themselves,
studying genes and DNA, the basics of biology.
Punks and stoners hiding in the back,
looking to sneak out when supervision lacks.
As always the ones with whom to be,
ghetto fabulous reigns supreme.
Don't forget the thirsty ones,
you�ll find them around the pop machine.
Breaking out the awesome moves,
going crazy in the hip hop scene.
To look sexy in your prime,
Wonder bras, kitten heels, and above the knee hem lines.
The pictures show all we see,
what was cool and what was hip.
The yearbook keeps our memories.

Katie

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18 Years Ago


Wow...that was really good. I liked how you made it look like we were going through a year book with you. Welcome to the Cafe! I'm Catrina and I look forward to reading more of your work.

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18 Years Ago


Thanks a bunch!

Kate

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18 Years Ago


lol i guess yer not allowed to vote for yourself huh? jk ::biggrin::

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18 Years Ago


Since I have no idea how to post a link, here's mine... I hope it's in time.


The 60's-

The sixties brought a race,
The first televised debate.
Kennedy and Nixon buzz
But not of Watergate.

In sixty-one and sixty-two,
Americans in space.
Pesticide banned from use,
The DDT disgrace.

Sixty-three brought sudden death
To America's regime.
And racism to MLK
Bore the famous dream.

Beatles caused a tailspin
And the computer mouse was born
In sixty-four, before double-click
And dot-commers googled porn.

Hem-lines of the Mini-skirt
In sixty-five went retro.
The Big Apple lost to Tokyo
As largest worldwide metro.

In sixty-six, Walt Disney died,
He's Mickey Mouse's dad.
Psychedelic, acid colors
Became the latest fad.

Sixty-seven, a heart transplant,
The first in history.
Sixty-eight took MLK
And Bobby Kennedy.

Sixty-nine brought Woodstock,
Sex, drugs and Rock and Roll.
Americans on the moon
And Nixon wins the poll.

Cheerio, cool, hip sixties,
The decade with a flair.
If you remember it at all,
You weren't really there.

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18 Years Ago


It's been great to read what all of you have worked on. Indeed you transmitted some excellent messages that I hope many read.

I will give everyone time to finish voting today until 2pm EST. Then the winner will be featured for the rest of the week, together with the winning piece. Also, look for the next challenge later today!

Hope you all had a great weekend.

Happy Monday! ;)

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