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his words

3 Years Ago


need some feedback on this 

His words are like a snake.
Every time he talks, I get scared. 
His words are fire. 
They hurt me. 
They scare me. 
They damage me. 
They bring me pain. 
When he enters the room, i am scared. 
I know he is trying to be a father. 
He tries and tries. 
 I know. 
He makes me cry. 
He makes my body cold. 
Every time he talks. I shake. 
I am paralyzed by his words. 
Makes me feel I have to be the perfect daughter. 
I am not perfect dad. 
I am a mess. 
Your'e daughter is a mess.