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alright divvies

8 Years Ago


if you can get through the barrier of nonsense you might find a seed of a good story here.

i think a shape kinda like a spiral is what this is. i'm not doing anything with it so please hopefully get the feel of it and make it yours please though get back to me cause it would be nice to hear.
forgive me i am drunk
a man is walking to work in a big city and he is hit by a car
the driver gets out and trys to help
the victim dies in his arms but before dying says ' i know you'
cut to the drivers job he is a hypnotheripist and does his first client and says how did you die last time
the regressed client descibes a car crash and dying in his arms before....
turns out you can regress to anyone anytime cause we are all the same whatever
maybe starts useing this knowledge for greed selfishness then realises the is a bigger truth and beauty than the original wierd reality. 
anyway tell me what you think 
also do you think that true beauty is word