Underground Writers Network Forum Hi everyone!

Hey everyone, I'm new at this.  Feel free to message me, chat or whatever.  I'm nice.  On to business - I need feedback.  Any kind of feedback is welcome.  Feel free to criticize grammar, punctuation and spelling AS WELL AS what you think of my actual writing.  I'm more than happy to read the work of others although I would prefer to buddy up with some other beginners.  I mean, I'm not sure I would feel right criticizing a veteran writer.  I'd feel like a college ball player telling an MLB superstar how to pitch.  But, like I said I'm willing to read whatever, just not poetry.  I don't understand poetry and I wouldn't be good at reviewing it.  Nothing personal, poets!  I still love you as human beings!
Right now I am working on a short story called Oscar.  Please check it out.  Thanks!