Underground Writers Network Forum Novel

Hello! I am in the final stages of writing my 112,000 literary fantasy novel. To keep me sharp, I read all kinds of books and break down what the author does well (or not well) and how he/she managed it. I post these reviews and pieces of my novel along with posts on the writing process on my blog.

I post regularly and only post relevant material. I'd love reviews of my writing there, if you would.
Here's a question: What element of craft do you love to see in other authors' writing?