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Haeshin

Read My Pet Project? 14 Years Ago Haeshin here. My pet project is a story titled 'Saintclair', focusing on the genres of fantasy, drama, action, and adventure, mostly geared toward anyone with 'teen' in their ages. This is the story I put out on display to readers and possibly potential employers, but I have trouble finding critics to help me polish it up. Summary's down below, so if it sounds interesting or if you have the time, kindly read and review.       "In the time of the Sky Era cities were kept above the clouds by use of magic, and then a war brought them down in a explosive Fall that turned Regaia into a desert planet. Thousands of years later people born with the ability to use magic are called Magus, and they are oppressed with the blame for the Fall that ended a golden era. Magus are blamed again when relics of the past come alive, causing disaster, but among them is a boy who refuses to take any of it. He woke one night in a world and a body that aren't his, and neither is the magic that his new body allows him to have."     Link to Saintclair: