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Hello everyone! I am planning to write my first novel, and am new to novel writing. I am looking for constructive criticism and feedback to help improve my novel as I write it. 

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So id like some opinions on if you would read this kind of book? So Im a tragic love story kinda gal and I've been working on a interconnected book series with all sorts of Creature, Lands, and stories for the last 5 years. This is kinda a rough description. Its Fantasy/Romance. I have 4 main books and a bunch of side stories I'm working on. My first book, "Following Ravens" is about the Grim Reaper (My own take on him). My Second Book, "Firefly" is about a survivor who's family was killed by a demon when she was a child. As she matures, her abilities begin surfacing and the more of a struggle that her life becomes the worse her powers get, turning into something uncontrollable. My Third Book, "Withering Rose" is about a God Hunter who was exiled by her family for having a soft heart. She attends an Academy that her Father helped create, hoping to develop the skills required to be one of the top best God Hunter's in the world. She befriends a boy who's family was killed by hers for being Hydras (Dragon shifters). My Fourth Book, "Casting Moonlight" is about a Celestial being who was sent to Earth. She is taken in by the ruler of Hell/Demons, then kidnapped by the anti-Christ. Meanwhile an Angel who's playing God wants her power for his own use.

So id like some opinions on if you would read this kind of book? So Im a tragic love story kinda gal and I've been working on a interconnected book series with all sorts of Creature, Lands, and stories for the last 5 years. This is kinda a rough description. Its Fantasy/Romance. I have 4 main books and a bunch of side stories I'm working on. My first book, "Following Ravens" is about the Grim Reaper (My own take on him). My Second Book, "Firefly" is about a survivor who's family was killed by a demon when she was a child. As she matures, her abilities begin surfacing and the more of a struggle that her life becomes the worse her powers get, turning into something uncontrollable. My Third Book, "Withering Rose" is about a God Hunter who was exiled by her family for having a soft heart. She attends an Academy that her Father helped create, hoping to develop the skills required to be one of the top best God Hunter's in the world. She befriends a boy who's family was killed by hers for being Hydras (Dragon shifters). My Fourth Book, "Casting Moonlight" is about a Celestial being who was sent to Earth. She is taken in by the ruler of Hell/Demons, then kidnapped by the anti-Christ. Meanwhile an Angel who's playing God wants her power for his own use.

So id like some opinions on if you would read this kind of book? So Im a tragic love story kinda gal and I've been working on a interconnected book series with all sorts of Creature, Lands, and stories for the last 5 years. This is kinda a rough description. Its Fantasy/Romance. I have 4 main books and a bunch of side stories I'm working on. My first book, "Following Ravens" is about the Grim Reaper (My own take on him). My Second Book, "Firefly" is about a survivor who's family was killed by a demon when she was a child. As she matures, her abilities begin surfacing and the more of a struggle that her life becomes the worse her powers get, turning into something uncontrollable. My Third Book, "Withering Rose" is about a God Hunter who was exiled by her family for having a soft heart. She attends an Academy that her Father helped create, hoping to develop the skills required to be one of the top best God Hunter's in the world. She befriends a boy who's family was killed by hers for being Hydras (Dragon shifters). My Fourth Book, "Casting Moonlight" is about a Celestial being who was sent to Earth. She is taken in by the ruler of Hell/Demons, then kidnapped by the anti-Christ. Meanwhile an Angel who's playing God wants her power for his own use.

Your group looks interesting & I'll give it a try, even tho I usually don't do groups. I'll try to keep up with all the action here as long as I can! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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We're brand new to the site and was wondering if anyone would like to review our work and give any critiques! Thanks!

We're new and need as many reviews as possible!

I posted a poem I wrote about K.J. Bishop on my profile. I would post a link here but I am not sure how. I am completely self educated so my English is not the best. But I have a need to be a writer. I have written a short surrealist-pulp novella. that I am thinking about posting on this website so that I may find advice to primarily help with grammar. The novella is called The Prophet Coffin: or, bumming cigarettes on judgment day. It is a romantic comedy based off of the book of revelation. If you like surrealism, weird fiction, or the high-modernist stream of consciousnesses style of character development then please contact me. I would love to find people to talk about the craft with. thank you for reading this.

I posted a poem I wrote about K.J. Bishop on my profile. I would post a link here but I am not sure how. I am completely self educated so my English is not the best. But I have a need to be a writer. I have written a short surrealist-pulp novella. that I am thinking about posting on this website so that I may find advice to primarily help with grammar. The novella is called The Prophet Coffin: or, bumming cigarettes on judgment day. It is a romantic comedy based off of the book of revelation. If you like surrealism, weird fiction, or the high-modernist stream of consciousnesses style of character development then please contact me. I would love to find people to talk about the craft with. thank you for reading this.

I posted a poem I wrote about K.J. Bishop on my profile. I would post a link here but I am not sure how. I am completely self educated so my English is not the best. But I have a need to be a writer. I have written a short surrealist-pulp novella. that I am thinking about posting on this website so that I may find advice to primarily help with grammar. The novella is called The Prophet Coffin: or, bumming cigarettes on judgment day. It is a romantic comedy based off of the book of revelation. If you like surrealism, weird fiction, or the high-modernist stream of consciousnesses style of character development then please contact me. I would love to find people to talk about the craft with. thank you for reading this.