Thriller Writer's Room Forum A babe in the woods...

I'm brand new to this site and I'm not sure how everything works as yet.  I welcome, and crave an honest critique of my work.  I'm not sure if I post the short story in its entirety here in the forum.  Or is there a more preferred way to do this? 

You can post replies in the 'writing' area, that's where we comment and critique the work. Anyway, welcome.