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jamal

Review this poem please 11 Years Ago forgiven not forgotten Chapter 1 Hours felt like seconds, you made earth into heaven. Laying on the beach, watching the stars in this moment, they seem so close but yet so far i close my eyes,i wake up to your smile like it is a sun rise you are my inner peace,our relationship is a untold story. That I love to read. Chapter 2 Somewhere in time, a rift was created that marked a future of a separation Caught in sinful act,an explanation in silence, it became the rift that divided. Overcome by regret,tears in your eyes, like you wished for death. A memory that my heart keeps deep, my beautiful star on the beach, this is our final chapter that you need to read. Chapter 3 you are forgiven, but never forgotten. the time we had, are in my dreams,and I have them often. Our relationship may become a dusty coffin. yet you are my sun rise,an angel on this earth that cries a broken soul from regret and lies. She opens herself to forgiveness, it might be hard, yet she tries, the last line reads, forgive yourself before your soul bleeds to death.