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I have slowly add chapters to my story, A Hunter's Evolution, on the site and I’ve finally made it two the last two chapters of the first story of the series (whopping 63 but I haven’t put them all on the site yet). Now I have the chance to start the editing and clean-up. As you see the Chapter numbers drop at the beginning, it is the sign of its second big editing and hopefully closer to me nailing it. My big problem is, I suck at editing. I would love your help in anything. If you ever see anything off please don’t be afraid to point it out. I’m inside the big box and can miss the view spotted from the outside. Thanks

I will do my best to review your work. Hope you can continue to review mine. Best wishes in your editing and book.