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Feedback? short poem

8 Years Ago


Shadows in the lonely nights
Greet me in a breeze
With a handshake so tight
leaves my body to freeze.

These anchoring shadows
Crippling and jarring
Plunge through my sorrow
Frantic waves come crashing As the  trident lays hidden in its depths

Shall we sink for security or lift for exposure?

Re: Feedback? short poem

8 Years Ago


WoW ! I say ,well done 
& thanks for sharing with the group   :)


Keep up the fantastic writing..
maria

Re: Feedback? short poem

8 Years Ago


if someone is sharing with the group please take a moment and try to leave  a comment 
out of courtesy..
  I may not be on everyday to review or comment what is added to the forum ..just saying

We as a group need to be a part not to split apart...

thank you.
maria