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Hi, I would like some feedback on the beginning of the story i am writing. It is called The Shelter, and i actually don't really know what the plot is yet, so if i could get some ideas that would be great! thanks. 

Figure out your plot and the direction you want your story to go. Can't call it your work if we do that for you ;). Just write what you like and you'll be ok.