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So I've been loosely writing a story for a while now, and I've finally decided that I should do something with it. It's probably not that good, but it needs to improve somehow, what better way then getting input. Its basically about a teenager in high school trying to figure out his life. If you're interested in helping me improve my story, check out my profile. It's the only story written (A New Prospective).