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Facing the Pain

9 Years Ago


I see the pain you face even through your smile,
You tell me that the booze and drugs help you run from the past
Im not blind I can see that you don’t want to be that way
You try your hardest to hide from the demons but they find you fast
It tears you up inside and it burns you down to the floor
If its the way you want to live, go
But I won’t give up ‘cause you’re the one thing that keeps me alive
I want you, I need you, why can’t we be us.
Forget the pain forget the fear. Let go of the past and hold on to me because I am right here.

Re: Facing the Pain

9 Years Ago


Same goes for you please just make it a poem through your add writing feature.

Re: Facing the Pain

9 Years Ago


im new to like all of this. im almost positive that i made it a poem like you said, but in case what do i need to go to do that or at least make sure that i already have.

Re: Facing the Pain

9 Years Ago


Welcome to the site and the group Scarlet Victory  
I did a review on your page..and to add to that, a poem leaves you to draw your own conclusion.  Writing poetry can be a healing process, putting down on paper all the emotions locked up inside ones head, a way of remembering and a way of re-living.  Poetry has many forms from free verse to sonnet but all poems tell a story, a story of words, words wrapped around each other in such away that they flow together, locked in meaning.

Re: Facing the Pain

9 Years Ago


Good evening Maria! I appreciate the warm welcome. I look forward to reading more of your wonderful works and i am very excited to be part of the group. Your words serve as encouragement to you and i just want to tell you that i appreciate it.

Re: Facing the Pain

9 Years Ago


aww that is so sweet:)  & thank you!