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The Dove (P.S. I it keeps messing up my formatting. I apologize.)9 Years AgoWhy did you stop writing?
I have inquired this so many times, And all you do is shrug, All you do is tell me that you don’t know, But I do.
You stopped
writing because you have managed to effectively kill it,
And by it, I mean that demon inside of your head that gnawed
at your soul
Until you were a shell of a human being, That demon that would not let you go, The one that you battled for ages.
But why did
you stop bleeding onto paper? You stopped dotting your i’s
with tears And curling your g’s
and y’s with smiles, Each crossed t was
your anger,
And each semicolon symbolized a struggle that you’ve
overcome.
I miss your
soul Because the demon that you fought off with words
It came back and stole them from you, You smile more and write less, You laugh now but write no more.
Was your
creativity in your sadness? The misery that consumed you drove you mad,
But the consequence was beautiful, And I’m happy that you’re better,
But I mourn the loss of the artist that painted images in my
mind from words on paper.
Where are
you? This is not a selfish plea, But this is a call of desperation
Because I thirst for the words that flow from your veins,
The stories that gush from your mind.
Can only
the raven be your muse?
The dove coos up above but it does not tickle your fancy
like the darkness did,
You preferred black to white, scarlet to yellow,
And by God, you were the best of us, But my Lord, you were the worst.
Why do I
mourn you? You were beautiful but you were damaged,
And each word, line, stanza was deep and dark and heavy,
And through the words on paper, I could sense the poison in
your veins,
And I felt more of your soul there than in all the years
that I’ve known you.
But what
happened?
I saw the correlation between the madness and the artistry,
You bled your emotions onto the paper and it was beautiful,
And then you got better, and it was lovely,
But in doing so, maestro, you seemed to have lost sight of
the song of your life.
But what of
the dove, of the light? I miss the art but I care for the being, And no song is worth the pain, And nothing beautiful is worth dying for,
And when I ask you to write again, I ask not for the raven but
for the dove. |
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Re: The Dove9 Years AgoCould you please add it to your writinh list and post it to the group writing list?
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Re: The Dove9 Years AgoThank You:) I did a review on your page ..we also have a place where you may submit your work to the group..
see example down below,,, (just click on ''writing'' & submit) Group Members Writing Forum |
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Re: The Dove9 Years AgoSorry, I did not realize this, but that you for letting me know! :)
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