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The Dove (P.S. I it keeps messing up my formatting. I apologize.)

9 Years Ago


Why did you stop writing? 
 I have inquired this so many times, 
 And all you do is shrug, 
 All you do is tell me that you don’t know, 
 But I do.             
You stopped writing because you have managed to effectively kill it, 
And by it, 
I mean that demon inside of your head that gnawed at your soul 
Until you were a shell of a human being, 
 That demon that would not let you go, 
 The one that you battled for ages.             
But why did you stop bleeding onto paper? 
 You stopped dotting your i’s with tears 
 And curling your g’s and y’s with smiles, 
 Each crossed t was your anger, 
And each semicolon symbolized a struggle that you’ve overcome.             
I miss your soul 
 Because the demon that you fought off with words 
It came back and stole them from you, 
 You smile more and write less, 
 You laugh now but write no more.             
Was your creativity in your sadness? 
 The misery that consumed you drove you mad, 
But the consequence was beautiful, 
 And I’m happy that you’re better, 
But I mourn the loss of the artist that painted images in my mind from words on paper.             Where are you? 
 This is not a selfish plea, 
 But this is a call of desperation 
Because I thirst for the words that flow from your veins, 
The stories that gush from your mind.             
Can only the raven be your muse? 
The dove coos up above but it does not tickle your fancy like the darkness did, 
You preferred black to white, scarlet to yellow, 
And by God, you were the best of us, 
 But my Lord, you were the worst.             
Why do I mourn you? 
 You were beautiful but you were damaged, 
And each word, line, stanza was deep and dark and heavy, 
And through the words on paper, 
I could sense the poison in your veins, 
And I felt more of your soul there than in all the years that I’ve known you.             But what happened? 
I saw the correlation between the madness and the artistry, 
You bled your emotions onto the paper and it was beautiful, 
And then you got better, and it was lovely, 
But in doing so, maestro, you seemed to have lost sight of the song of your life.             But what of the dove, of the light? 
 I miss the art but I care for the being, 
 And no song is worth the pain, 
 And nothing beautiful is worth dying for, 
And when I ask you to write again, 
I ask not for the raven but for the dove.

Re: The Dove

9 Years Ago


Could you please add it to your writinh list and post it to the group writing list?

Re: The Dove

9 Years Ago


Thank You:)  I did a review on your page ..we also have a place where you may submit your work to the group.. 

 see example down below,,, (just click on ''writing'' & submit)



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Re: The Dove

9 Years Ago


Sorry, I did not realize this, but that you for letting me know! :)