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Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


Okay great I'll get started as soon as I can =) probably tomorrow though I have church tonight.

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


ok, and also be sure to add descriptions of people and places and stuff, so that the reader can visualize everything, because right now, they kinda can't

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


Originally posted by Crazy Dragon Lady
The only thing I want you to remember is to keep personalities distinct and unique
Because right now, if I see something, a lot of the time, I can't tell whether it's jay, raven, dove, darkling, or darknight (sometimes, I've fixed most of those spots) talking, whereas between my characters and mad's (mostly, 12 and peri can be a bit tough to tell between sometimes) the distinction is clear

yeah i think i will make agent 12 more like how he appears in this book when he first pops up (gruff, a little demanding, points out the obvious) in the next two when we edit it

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


ok
i'm just saying that there's a few times in the first book where they have the same personality

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


GUYS GUYS GUYS
SERQEONIUM (sir-cone-ium)
like from serqekinesis
ACID
ACID WEAPONS

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


Acid weapons?
Okay then...
>=] (maniacal grin)

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


I made a doc in the Descendants folder called Descendants Bk1 Part1 REWRITE, that's where I'm rewriting the Jay, Raven, and Dove POVs if you want to check it out.
IT IS SO MUCH BETTER and I've changed it to mention Kyndra and my family instead of completely omitting them. Also Jay had her costume made in more than one night, and some tech that she stole instead of creating it all. Plus I got rid of the endless space pocket, the collapsible computer, and the DSi, because that's ridiculous and unrealistic for a 13-year-old girl to have made on her own. She does however have some hacking codes she takes with her on a hard drive which I mention later.

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


cool and that sounds awesome :) keep up the great work!

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


anyone around?

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


uh yeah
i think jay's on a tech ban

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


raven suffered from rapid onset CJD
google it

also: brain diseases that I’m thinking that telepaths suffer from:
CJD
Huntington’s disease
Neurodegeneration
Alzheimer’s
Parkinson’s
they might not necessarily die, but they are affected in some way, shape, or form

also, what other mind-related powers can you get brain diseases from?

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


Yes that so makes sense!!!
And no I'm not on tech ban, sorry I just haven't been on writerscafe a lot.
I have golf on Mondays and Fridays and church on Wednesdays so I don't get as much type-time those days.
And church Sunday mornings of course.
And sometimes my parents plan stuff on Saturdays.
SPEAKING OF
As far as I know, the rest of June and July I have Saturdays free for get-togethers. Just so you know.

EDIT - looked up CDJ and WTFM if I hadn't know that existed back then I'd swear I copied what happens to her from the description!!!

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


me too, i'm pretty sure, i think that we should get together at mad's house next
or should i invite you guys over?
hey mad, when's the next saturday that you don't have anything going on?
and yeah same!!

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


well
errrrr
next saturday
and the saturday after school ends
and july 7
and july 14
that's all i have for now

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


alright
I'll try to invite you guys over next Saturday

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


I'll talk to my parents
like this coming saturday?

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


My dad says july 7th and 14th are probably open, on the 14th I'd have to be over all day because it's his work bbq, he's not sure about the other two.

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


no the saturday after day after tomorrow i'm talking about
whenever that one is
like the 16th of june

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


I could do the ninth and sixteenth of June, plus July seventh, fourteenth, twenty-first, and twenty-eighth =)

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6 Years Ago


uh i can't do the 28th, my mom has a meet that day, but any of the other days i can do