The Authors 3 Forum Thangs and Stuhff
Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoOkay great I'll get started as soon as I can =) probably tomorrow though I have church tonight.
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agook, and also be sure to add descriptions of people and places and stuff, so that the reader can visualize everything, because right now, they kinda can't
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoOriginally posted by Crazy Dragon Lady The only thing I want you to remember is to keep personalities distinct and unique Because right now, if I see something, a lot of the time, I can't tell whether it's jay, raven, dove, darkling, or darknight (sometimes, I've fixed most of those spots) talking, whereas between my characters and mad's (mostly, 12 and peri can be a bit tough to tell between sometimes) the distinction is clear yeah i think i will make agent 12 more like how he appears in this book when he first pops up (gruff, a little demanding, points out the obvious) in the next two when we edit it |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agook
i'm just saying that there's a few times in the first book where they have the same personality |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoGUYS GUYS GUYS
SERQEONIUM (sir-cone-ium) like from serqekinesis ACID ACID WEAPONS |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoAcid weapons?
Okay then... >=] (maniacal grin) |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoI made a doc in the Descendants folder called Descendants Bk1 Part1 REWRITE, that's where I'm rewriting the Jay, Raven, and Dove POVs if you want to check it out.
IT IS SO MUCH BETTER and I've changed it to mention Kyndra and my family instead of completely omitting them. Also Jay had her costume made in more than one night, and some tech that she stole instead of creating it all. Plus I got rid of the endless space pocket, the collapsible computer, and the DSi, because that's ridiculous and unrealistic for a 13-year-old girl to have made on her own. She does however have some hacking codes she takes with her on a hard drive which I mention later. |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agocool and that sounds awesome :) keep up the great work!
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agoanyone around?
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agouh yeah
i think jay's on a tech ban |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agoraven suffered from rapid onset CJD
google it also: brain diseases that I’m thinking that telepaths suffer from: CJD Huntington’s disease Neurodegeneration Alzheimer’s Parkinson’s they might not necessarily die, but they are affected in some way, shape, or form also, what other mind-related powers can you get brain diseases from? |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoYes that so makes sense!!!
And no I'm not on tech ban, sorry I just haven't been on writerscafe a lot. I have golf on Mondays and Fridays and church on Wednesdays so I don't get as much type-time those days. And church Sunday mornings of course. And sometimes my parents plan stuff on Saturdays. SPEAKING OF As far as I know, the rest of June and July I have Saturdays free for get-togethers. Just so you know. EDIT - looked up CDJ and WTFM if I hadn't know that existed back then I'd swear I copied what happens to her from the description!!! |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agome too, i'm pretty sure, i think that we should get together at mad's house next
or should i invite you guys over? hey mad, when's the next saturday that you don't have anything going on? and yeah same!! |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agowell
errrrr next saturday and the saturday after school ends and july 7 and july 14 that's all i have for now |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agoalright
I'll try to invite you guys over next Saturday |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoI'll talk to my parents
like this coming saturday? |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoMy dad says july 7th and 14th are probably open, on the 14th I'd have to be over all day because it's his work bbq, he's not sure about the other two.
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agono the saturday after day after tomorrow i'm talking about
whenever that one is like the 16th of june |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoI could do the ninth and sixteenth of June, plus July seventh, fourteenth, twenty-first, and twenty-eighth =)
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agouh i can't do the 28th, my mom has a meet that day, but any of the other days i can do
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