The Authors 3 Forum Thangs and Stuhff
Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoYEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH WOOOOOOOOOOOO
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i am going to be completely and utterly exhausted this week and that is OK |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agoyep same
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoJAY JAY JAY
PLEEEEEEEEASE RESPOND SHOULD I BRING MY TROMBONE SHOULD I BRING MY SLEEPING BAG SHOULD I BRING MY CHROMEBOOK |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoJAAAAAAY
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoC'MON, MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoI KINDA NEED TO KNOW, Y'KNOW
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoSHOOT SORRY HAVEN'T BEEN ON
YES YES YES YES JUST YES ALL JUST IN CASE AHHHHHH |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoHELLLLLOOOOOOOOOO
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agohey Jules, I fixed your timeline for Jay it looks like this:
May 2003 - born April 2005 - sister born June 2016 - Morgan goes to SWORD, Jay goes to S.O.S. May 2018 - She has finally trained enough to go after SWORD. Darkling and her launch their attack, and Darkling gets his arm blown off by the explosion June 2018- Overcome by guilt, she runs to the IIEM and joins them. December 2018- She finds out that Darknight GMed her January 2018- She leaves the IIEM to join SWORD February 2018- March 2019- Her adventures with SWORD April 2019- December 2020- Raven’s story January 2021- August 2021- Dove’s story September 2021- File Two starts December 2021- Quiver and Byrd hack into the doc, inviting Pitch, Gena, and Cresce December 2022- The Amazing Ant Fights January 2023- REBEL is formed, Darknight hits Agent 12 with the power stealer, Incitatus challenges Darknight and kills Dove, Darknight gets himself captured February 2023- Third Descendants File begins. Devilcat goes through Metamorphosis. Pitch is captured. Her and Darkling go off the grid 2025- 2039- Deviant Timelines 2041- Book Four because I had to make sure that everything (mostly the first book) lined up and didn't happen all in one year, because for everyone else, the first book happened over the course of five and a half to six years |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agowoahhh oh wow two years dang
didn't think of it like that but yes. Can you mention that in the chapters where the time lapse happens? |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agoi'm not listing chapter names, i'm listing events
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoI know
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agoif you want to know, go into drive and look, it's not that hard
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Ago*slow clap*
congrats guys, we have enough forum threads between the 3 of us to make a new page |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agonice XD
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agohey guys, we're making little comics in art class
i need like a 4-panel scene from one of the metaverse books any suggestions? |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years Agouh... let's see...
spar and talon's first date |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoI'm thinking about just completely rewriting Jay, Raven, and Dove's POV stories, because there is so much awkward construction and stuff I need to add. it'll be generally the same events, but I'll make the time leaps more obvious, and add in hints to whatever needs to be hinted at, including the thing with Jay's parents, and mentions at her sister having a power like it says in DC (remember she gets teased for not having powers when her sister does).
I just think it would be easier to completely rewrite it... I'll do it as fast as I can, I'll put the doc in the Descendants folder on Kato's drive. |
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Re: Thangs and Stuhff6 Years AgoOk, sounds good
I was actually hoping that you didn't think that we meant to fix a few spots, that we wanted you to rewrite parts (since it's your backstories) and that I wouldn't have to tell you that so that's good The only thing I want you to remember is to keep personalities distinct and unique Because right now, if I see something, a lot of the time, I can't tell whether it's jay, raven, dove, darkling, or darknight (sometimes, I've fixed most of those spots) talking, whereas between my characters and mad's (mostly, 12 and peri can be a bit tough to tell between sometimes) the distinction is clear But it sounds good, as long as you finish it. |