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Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


YEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH WOOOOOOOOOOOO

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


[insert more hype here]
i am going to be completely and utterly exhausted this week and that is OK

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


yep same

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


JAY JAY JAY
PLEEEEEEEEASE RESPOND
SHOULD I BRING MY TROMBONE
SHOULD I BRING MY SLEEPING BAG
SHOULD I BRING MY CHROMEBOOK

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


JAAAAAAY

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


C'MON, MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


I KINDA NEED TO KNOW, Y'KNOW

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6 Years Ago


SHOOT SORRY HAVEN'T BEEN ON 
YES
YES
YES
YES 
JUST YES ALL JUST IN CASE
AHHHHHH

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6 Years Ago


HELLLLLOOOOOOOOOO

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hey Jules, I fixed your timeline for Jay it looks like this:
May 2003 - born
April 2005 - sister born
June 2016 - Morgan goes to SWORD, Jay goes to S.O.S.
May 2018 - She has finally trained enough to go after SWORD. Darkling and her launch their attack, and Darkling gets his arm blown off by the explosion
June 2018- Overcome by guilt, she runs to the IIEM and joins them.
December 2018- She finds out that Darknight GMed her
January 2018- She leaves the IIEM to join SWORD
February 2018- March 2019- Her adventures with SWORD
April 2019- December 2020- Raven’s story
January 2021- August 2021- Dove’s story
September 2021- File Two starts
December 2021- Quiver and Byrd hack into the doc, inviting Pitch, Gena, and Cresce
December 2022- The Amazing Ant Fights
January 2023- REBEL is formed, Darknight hits Agent 12 with the power stealer, Incitatus challenges Darknight and kills Dove, Darknight gets himself captured
February 2023- Third Descendants File begins. Devilcat goes through Metamorphosis. Pitch is captured. Her and Darkling go off the grid
2025- 2039- Deviant Timelines
2041- Book Four

because I had to make sure that everything (mostly the first book) lined up and didn't happen all in one year, because for everyone else, the first book happened over the course of five and a half to six years

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


woahhh oh wow two years dang
didn't think of it like that
but yes.
Can you mention that in the chapters where the time lapse happens?

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i'm not listing chapter names, i'm listing events

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I know

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6 Years Ago


if you want to know, go into drive and look, it's not that hard

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6 Years Ago


*slow clap*
congrats guys, we have enough forum threads between the 3 of us to make a new page

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6 Years Ago


nice XD

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6 Years Ago


hey guys, we're making little comics in art class
i need like a 4-panel scene from one of the metaverse books
any suggestions?

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6 Years Ago


uh... let's see... 
spar and talon's first date

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6 Years Ago


I'm thinking about just completely rewriting Jay, Raven, and Dove's POV stories, because there is so much awkward construction and stuff I need to add. it'll be generally the same events, but I'll make the time leaps more obvious, and add in hints to whatever needs to be hinted at, including the thing with Jay's parents, and mentions at her sister having a power like it says in DC (remember she gets teased for not having powers when her sister does).
I just think it would be easier to completely rewrite it... I'll do it as fast as I can, I'll put the doc in the Descendants folder on Kato's drive.

Re: Thangs and Stuhff

6 Years Ago


Ok, sounds good
I was actually hoping that you didn't think that we meant to fix a few spots, that we wanted you to rewrite parts (since it's your backstories) and that I wouldn't have to tell you that so that's good
The only thing I want you to remember is to keep personalities distinct and unique
Because right now, if I see something, a lot of the time, I can't tell whether it's jay, raven, dove, darkling, or darknight (sometimes, I've fixed most of those spots) talking, whereas between my characters and mad's (mostly, 12 and peri can be a bit tough to tell between sometimes) the distinction is clear
But it sounds good, as long as you finish it.