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Re: Darkness Complete

6 Years Ago


yeah XD

Re: Darkness Complete

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=)

Re: Darkness Complete

6 Years Ago


so... any idea for what mission my characters should be on?

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6 Years Ago


nope.

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well that sucks bc neither do i and i can't write my pov until i figure out what it is and mad is no help either

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6 Years Ago


Maybe they're recovering an artifact of some sort? And they have to get past a ton of traps and minions and stuff. And they use the artifact/item they're retrieving to power a device of some sort...

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6 Years Ago


yes im no help because i have been stressing over jazz tryouts and the 20-something missing assignments my parents are killing me over

what were you saying? missing artifact or something like that? i don't think i can contribute any of my villains, drum major already died, so

Re: Darkness Complete

6 Years Ago


Oh that's for Kato's she needs a mission for her characters.
HEY I NEED HELP
JAY AND MANDY NEED TO TALK
I NEED THE DETAILS
DN KIDNAPPED HER OK WHERE ARE THEY READ MY CHAPTERS TELL ME IF IT'S RIGHT (the one right after yours Darkness Complete)
HELLLP PLEASE
HELP WITH THE CONVERSATION TOO

Re: Darkness Complete

6 Years Ago


u, that's good, jay, i'll work on it
and uh
i can help with the darknight part
make a thread for it and we'll help out

Re: Darkness Complete

6 Years Ago


MADDDD

So you've read all of Darkness Complete, right? Does it line up with what you were thinking happens to Mandy? Also you have to help me construct their conversation for the next Jay POV because Jay and Mandy are going to talk while Mandy is Dn's captive...

Re: Darkness Complete

6 Years Ago


Yes I just read it
Its perfect
You wanna start?

Re: Darkness Complete

6 Years Ago


yeah so... the first part of the chapter... and correct if any of this is wrong...

Jay flew over the silent city towards the I.I.E.M. base. Where Mandy was locked up. Locked up. Because of Darknight. Because of who she was. Who she never wanted to be. The building came into view, and Jay landed on the roof. The lock on the rooftop door broke easily. She hid in the shadows as she made her way to the holding cells.
There. In one of the cells, huddled in the corner. A figure. A woman. "Mandy?"

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She looked up, and upon seeing Jay, let out a long stream of curses that took her aback. "First I get abducted, and now I have to deal with you?!" Mandy nearly spits. Her face contorted into a scowl that seems sculpted onto her face. 

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OO OO OO
Kyndra appears behind her. "Who's yelli- oh, hi Mandy!"

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Like a caged animal, she growls and shoves herself deeper into the cell. "Oh, what a nice little reunion we're having," she says, but no happiness is in her voice.

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"Mandy, please, listen to me," Jay begs.

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"What's her deal?" Kyndra asks, what looks like blue tattoos glowing on her skin, muscles tensed as if preparing for a fight. "And why is she in there?"

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"Some filthy metahuman thought I would look good as their daughter, so they drugged me and brought me here!" she yells, practically fuming.

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"Does Darknight know about this?" Kyndra asks, turning to me.

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Mandy scoffs. "He just so happens to be the filthy metahuman that brought me here."