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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agoactually they interact in the chunk that i talked about
or maybe that should be told only in memories while we write about the evil babies part |
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agoim thinking of writing a pov when mandy is 21, fresh outta tech school and a mechanic but you guys do the stuff before the time jump first
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agogot it
but should we actually write the scenes, or should they just be memories? i think that maybe we should write them but not post them, and just put in enough detail in the evil babies part so that the reader knows what happened |
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoDunno... I guess whatever works for the scene.
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoAlso for the wedding scene is that the DCT wedding?
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agook no base dimension |
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoUm I already have the wedding for that written out, it's in one of the files I gave you way back when I transferred all my google docs to your google drive...
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agoyou said that we'd write that together?
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoIf it's for the core dimension I wrote that in like seventh grade.
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agoo
maybe we should rewrite it to include accuracy? especially since me and mad's character's were supposed to be there and you knew none of my characters in 7th grade? |
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoIt doesn't really mention any people specifically besides Jay and Darkling themselves...
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agoexactly. you said that our characters would be invited, so...
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoI mean that never comes up. It's from Darkling's perspective and all he's thinking about is Jay (not surprising) and besides a tiny bit of Darknight POV... well I guess it mentions Arke and the Dirthawkers but only because dn happened to be watching them.
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agothat's what i'm saying, i think that it should be updated
kyndra would not have been able to resist saying something to jay |
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoYeah okay... but later, we need to focus on Descendants Bk 1 and getting that to editors
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agoyeah tru
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoHere's my Kyndra POV
“Kyndra! You have a guest!” my dad shouts up at me from the first floor. I cross my arms over my chest. “I’m trying to sleep!” I shout back “You’ll want to hear this. I’m letting them come up to your room!” he replies. I hear footsteps and swear, grabbing my shirt and pulling it on. I slip back under the covers as the door opens, and a tall woman with short black hair wearing a black suit sticks her head into my room. “May I come in?” she asks politely. “Will you go away if I say no?” I ask. She shakes her head and laughs a little. “That’s what I thought.” She steps into my room, silently avoiding the minesweep that’s become my floor. She reaches down and picks up my diagnosis paper from it’s spot where I tossed a few months ago when Jay and Mad visited. I haven’t seen either of them since, and I’m glad about it, if only to save my conscious. “My, my, my. Seems quite hopeless, eh?” she asks. I stare at her. “Who are the hell you?” “I am Alina Falchion, a board member of the Seraphimbian School for the Extraordinary, or SSE for short.” “And how does that apply to me?” the tone of my voice is bored, but my interest is piqued. “I’ve come to offer you a full scholarship for the rest of your school years, which includes paid college tuition of your choice. There will also be plenty of job opportunities, that you could easily get, as we will prepare you to the best of our abilities.” “For the next few months before I die? What’s the point?” “Ms. Melfin, we have strong reason to believe that we can cure you.” ---- ---- ---- I sit uncomfortably against the strangely cushy airplane seat as I wait for the plane to take off. Mrs. Falchion is in another section of the plane, talking to four what looked like holograms other people that I barely got a glance. A woman that was wearing a queenly dress with a face that looked like it could kill you with a glance. Anther woman wearing a strange purple-orange-red outfit. A man wearing a dark gray one-sleeved shirt under lighter gray metallic rock-ish material, with scars cris-crossing his visible skin, and a tough, mean look on his face. Another man, wearing dark clothes, with dark hair and eyes, a kind expression on his face. But what stand out about him most is dark bat or dragon-looking wings, and some sort of snake-like tail. Mrs. Falchion said something about a board meeting. Yeah, right. I’m starting to rethink this. She was very vague about what exactly the experimental treatment was, and now I no longer want it that bad. On a whim, I pull out my phone and google “seraphimbian school for the extraordinary”. The official school site comes up, and I look through it, everything matching up. Apparently, the red-orange-purple costume lady works with the creative kids, the queen woman teaches the disrespectful kids manners, the scarred man works with the troubled kids, and the dragon man- who in his picture has no wings-, along with Mrs. Falchion, are more the administrators and sometimes work as counselors. There’s a circle that says “Students! Click here to view more!” I click on it, but I am denied access. “Oh, really?” I mutter under my breath. “We’ll see about that.” I pull up some things and quickly hack into their network. What I find is not what I expected to. there's my kyndra pov |
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agoso following up what i said in a review of darkness complete (i know kato didn't see it so im putting it here)
here's what i said: how many povs do yall need to write before i can jump in again? ya know what if you guys just give me the things you want to happen in mandy's pov i can start now because you guys are so DANG FAST |
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agoum
well i have my povs planned out, i'm only going to do that, bc they show the major differences |
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agook jules what about you what do you think could happen in the mandy pov
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