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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoGot it =) Now just waiting on the rest of 12's POV
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agoi am GETTING CLOSE
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoPlz hurryyyyyyy
Do you need me to throw ideas at you? |
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agono I JUST NEED TO DO IT
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoTHEN JUST DO IT
ARE WE TALKING IN ALL CAPS I LOVE TALKING IN ALL CAPS |
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoYES ALL CAPS
SOMEONE ISOLATE ME I NEED TO WRITE THE DARN DIDDLY THING |
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoHERE WE GO GUYS I FINISHED IT
Fall is coming. A brisk cold wind whips through the shedding trees, colorful leaves whisking away in the jaunty breeze. Long shadows cover the streets as a mild day fades into a chilly night. The sky is bleeding, and so is his heart. He sits on the ledge, watching the bleeding colors in the sky, legs dangling haphazardly over a 50-story drop. Tears are on the brink of forming, but it's not because of the spectacular view. It had been nearly a year since he had run away. He was still young then, still innocent, but he had to escape. He stares at his left hand, a angry red line all that is left of the gaping wound. Horrid images still echo in his head. The bearded man standing over him yelling, screaming, screaming, screaming curses and blasphemies and half-truths as he held a gleaming silver belt buckle over his head, hitting him again and again until the man’s screams were drowned out by his own. Hiding as children thought to be angelic surrounded him, pummeling his face with their fists, laughing and jeering, leaving him to die. The adults that gaped at him whenever he passed, only making him feel worse because they hid their remorse better than the angelic kids. He knew what they muttered about him when he turned away. Freak. Trailer park trash. White trash with a bad haircut. Worthless. Cuts and scrapes and black eyes and belt buckles and scars and sucker punches and names. No one cared. No one noticed when he disappeared into the wilderness, never to be seen again. They probably wouldn’t even care if he died. He thought it would get better when Wilson came, when they went away, off on their own adventure, away from the cuts and scrapes and black eyes and belt buckles. But it didn’t. He can still remember that wretched day last winter. They were only trying to get food. They were hungry. And then the old man stopped them, gave him a gift he couldn’t resist. Swords. A way he could survive, defend himself. But it backfired. He can still remember the pain as the rifle was jammed into his skull, the blood-curdling scream that wasn’t his as he sat up, unaware of the sword still in his hand. He can still see the men he had taken out, their blood staining the pure white snow red. The grotesque face of the man he had killed, seared into his mind. He can still remember the way the branches whipped at him like every laugh, every punch, every name he had been called and every hit from the belt. You’re worthless. You might as well kill yourself. No one cares. You’re already dead. And then as if things couldn’t get worse, they fell off a cliff, somehow surviving, only to be greeted by an army of prejudiced men, hiding their fear behind their tranquilizer guns. He was taken out, but he could still remember the primitive roars and agonizing screams as Wilson, his friend, his gentle, loving friend, tore the men apart. They thought he was a freak. He had been shackled to the wall, forced to answer questions he didn’t know the answers to. They thought he was a murderer, a killer, a ruthless, angry teenager on a rampage. He was none of that. He just wanted to escape. And then he was offered a deal. It wasn’t much. It was either prison or to stay in captivity at S.W.O.R.D. He thought S.W.O.R.D would be the better choice at the time, but that was a mistake. At least there would be people like him in prison. It wasn’t any different from his old life. People avoided him like the plague, and whispered about him behind his back. Rumors about him spread like wildfires. He earned new names. Con. Loser. Junior Delinquent. Freak. And when the prying officials weren’t looking, it was just like his old life, cornered in an alleyway, but this time they were bigger and stronger. Every time it was new wounds opened, new nerves struck. People thought he was part of a gang, always in street fights. But he never defended himself. He never fought back. He was too weak, too gentle. And now he is here, in front of the bleeding sky. His heart might as well have been ripped out and thrown into the river. He wears a sweatshirt against the wind, but under it is years of torture, abuse, and isolation. He looks tough and weather- beaten on the outside, just like a street fighter, but like an egg, that shell is not hard to crack. One strike and the yolk would come oozing out. His shaggy green and blue hair whips in the wind. His silent tears are whisked away. He’s thinking. Thinking about the horror of a life he’s had so far. It’s been nothing but pain. Pain on the inside, eating him from the inside out, pain on the outside, eating him from the outside in. He looks at the bleeding colors, at his hands, at the drop below him. He could end it right here. All this pain, all this hurt, it could be gone. He just has to push off. The door to the roof opens. It’s Wilson, his sentient griffin companion. Despite coming all this way with him, he still remains distant from Wilson. He is human, and Wilson is not. He doesn’t understand the pain he has gone through. Wilson pauses in the door, watching him. “You ok, Max? ” he asks, neon green eyes shining. “I’m fine,” Max mutters, though he is definitely not fine. And with everything that has happened to him, who wouldn’t? But Wilson believes him. All Max hears is a distant “ok” and the door clicks shut softly, leaving him alone in his soliloquy. He stands up. He could end it. He could end it. Right here, right now. All this pain, the heartbreak, the anger, the sadness, all gone in an instant. But he pauses, as if there’s a wall between him and the 250-foot drop. What about Wilson? What will he think when he found out he is dead? And what if he survived somehow? What would they think then? Tears are streaming down his face now, too many to be carried away in the wind. The little voice inside his head pushes him closer to the edge, until his toes are over empty air. Just jump. Jump and all the pain will go away. He turns for the last time back to the door, hoping that maybe, just maybe, someone will care enough to stop him. But no one does. No one cares. Taking a final breath, and closing his eyes, he jumps. --------------- As the wind rushes loudly in his ears, he wonders what they will think when they find his body, but he dismisses it. It’s not like he was anyone important. No one would care anyway. BOOM *drops mic |
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoBEAUTIFUL
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agoit felt so good to finish it
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agowhen do jay, the dark bros inc., the dirthawkers and all them interfere with the mandy timeline
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoAFTER everyone's kids are born. At least, those who end up with kids. It'll probably be when Kage and Ciana are like sixteen to seventeen since Ciana's boyfriend has to be killed before then and Kage has to find Shadow Blade.
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agowe need to do an EPIC time jump then
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoYeah, but not yet
we need to write the conundrum i wrote: The explosion that blew off her right arm doesn’t injure her, just reveals her aquakinesis Instead, Seraphimbia recruits her when she hacks into their network on a dare (Kyndra is a lot smarter in this dimension) and they catch her She gets sent on a mission in the middle of the ocean, and she discovers her siren powers when the bad guys try to drown her She goes down a weird good-evil vigilante path, not sure whether she wants to be evil or good She doesn’t have a hatred for SWORD, since Seraphimbia recruited her before SWORD killed her family Her and her brothers were recruited and formed a team of agents that went on the craziest most dangerous missions It consists of Kyndra (Aquasong), Napier (Scarr), Tornike (), Rick (Bullutt), Drew (Whiplash), Krister (Ambush), Natalie (Rocksy), Shika (Tigg), Macie (Cherries), Katelynn (Firecat), Ethias (Firedog), Haden (Firemonkey), Sharon (Freezing Rain), Lemia (Sketcher), and Zani (Flame), Talon (Ocelot), Alekai (Snow Leopard) She doesn’t meet her boyfriend, since she comes into Seraphimbia at least two to three years before she did in the core dimension, and thus was on a much higher level than him She isn’t a secret agent, and uses her aquakinesis a lot When Kylara goes through metamorphosis, she gets darkness powers as well as pyroaviakinesis powers, and becomes the Dark Phoenix Pitch stays a villain, and him and Kylara become and awesome evil couple with lots of evil metababies and team up with IIEM and SOS on occasion Everyone knows that Ice Queen and Frostbyte are twins, and both are heros Ice Queen is killed by Jay in an ice villain showdown Frostbyte then challenges her and is killed too Pitch high-fives her, since he hated his sisters, ever since their birth killed their mom, and since his dad doted on them and neglected him, which caused him to go to the dark side Since Violet was killed, her (non-existent) daughter isn’t able to make any changes to the future timeline, so this timeline is stuck, like the core dimension Talon and Alekai were raised together (Alekai goes by Alek in this dimension), and now they’re an unbreakable sibling duo Their parents were actually killed, and they never discover that they’re shifters, but they do have their shifter powers and weapons Seraphimbia never rescues Ten and Lucent (Sol), and they died of their gunshot wounds Because of this, Dom was never brought in to Seraphimbia, and thus stayed with SWORD until his real powers are revealed when he steals the powers of a very high-up SWORD official, and they confine him to a lab to experiment on him Also because of this, Blackshadow was never brought into this dimension, and no one knows about him or creation powers Seraphimbia is ruled by a council of five, not three Savage’s wife doesn’t die The members are Swanhawk, Nightdragon, Starwraith, Pyra, and Savage Nightdragon is replaced by Root Swanhawk is replaced by Tails Swanhawk is killed, and Pyra goes dark, teaming up with Starwraith and Savage to get revenge on her killer Nightdragon is stunned by his daughters’ death, and basically lets them do whatever Nightdragon eventually recovers from his shock, and tries to get Pitch to be a hero, forcing Pitch to be just like him, and Pitch ends up killing him. Realizing what he’s done, Pitch runs away and joins the IIEM (or SOS), along with Dark Phoenix, and they spend their lives trying not to get killed by Seraphimbia for killing one of their leaders Gena never joins Seraphimbia, she instead is recruited by the Shifter academy, so her and Talon never meet Talon doesn’t ‘die’, because the books don’t take place Talon never falls in love, and eventually dies alone Kyndra doesn’t meet Darknight, Darkling, Jay, and the crew until her team is sent to capture Pitch and Dark Phoenix and bring them back to Seraphimbia The capture mission is unsuccessful, and Kyndra and a few other end up getting captured instead Kyndra develops the smallest crush on Darknight, even though he’s twenty years older, and betrays Seraphimbia and her team to join the IIEM, finally realizing that she wants to be a villain, and that she doesn’t want to be controlled by Seraphimbia Bullutt defects as well, because he’s in love with Kyndra. The feeling is not mutual Whiplash defects from Seraphimbia because he finds out that a Seraphimbian agent had killed his parents when he was a kid, and didn’t tell him Seraphimbia then sends her old team after her, and they are unsuccessful, with multiple casualties This starts an IIEM/SOS v. Seraphimbia battle. The IIEM/SOS is always one step ahead in each encounter, thanks to Kyndra, Draike, and Kylara The three Seraphimbian defectents become great friends with the IIEM/SOS leaders Two of Jenebris and Drailara’s kids should fall in love Seraphimbia gets back at the defective agents by killing: Kyndra: Both of her brothers Her parents Tries to kill Mandy, which fails because of her new superpowers Dark Phoenix: Both of her brothers Her ‘sister’ Her closest friends Pitch: Since he has no remaining family (killed his father, his mother died in childbirth, jay killed his sisters, seraphimbia failed to rescue his cousins, and no one knows what happened to his aunt and uncle) Seraphimbia instead captures all of his non-powered friends and experiments on them, turning them into grotesque half-monster creatures that carry out Seraphimbia’s bidding, and send them after him He and Kylara left their eldest child, who was two at the time, with a friend, because they didn’t want her to have to be on the run, they wanted her to be safe. Yeah right. Bullutt: Blurr His parents His closest friends Whiplash His closest friends They do the same thing to his puppy, Digger, that they did to Pitch’s friends, except give him superpowers Talon is hacking into some things for Seraphimbia, when she finds some old emails or correspondences of some kind on a server. She reads them out of boredom, and instantly fall in love with the sender. She hacks into more stuff to find out more about this person (creepy, i know) and then tries to find the person irl. Three guesses who it is. Nika and the rest of the Shifters are recruited by the Shifter Academy |
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agothis happens about the time that Descendants takes place
should we timeskip to there? i think i need to do a few kyndra povs tho... |
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoNot quite yet, there's the Jay POV I posted which is a month after she joins and Darkling's POV just after, and maybe Peri should do a Mandy POV noting that Jules has disappeared (since she now lives at S.O.S. base). Then we can time-skip as far as you need.
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agoi'm going to do a kyndra pov of her getting recruited by seraphimbia, set about a month after the last pov (she's 14)
then a couple years later, (she's 16) when she's on a mission with her team, then we need to do the section i put up earlier with the killing and everything |
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoYeah that works =) I'll just do Darkling's one POV that come directly after the one I just posted, then Kyndra's.
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoOriginally posted by Crazy Dragon Lady Yeah, but not yet we need to write the conundrum i wrote: The explosion that blew off her right arm doesn’t injure her, just reveals her aquakinesis Instead, Seraphimbia recruits her when she hacks into their network on a dare (Kyndra is a lot smarter in this dimension) and they catch her She gets sent on a mission in the middle of the ocean, and she discovers her siren powers when the bad guys try to drown her She goes down a weird good-evil vigilante path, not sure whether she wants to be evil or good She doesn’t have a hatred for SWORD, since Seraphimbia recruited her before SWORD killed her family Her and her brothers were recruited and formed a team of agents that went on the craziest most dangerous missions It consists of Kyndra (Aquasong), Napier (Scarr), Tornike (), Rick (Bullutt), Drew (Whiplash), Krister (Ambush), Natalie (Rocksy), Shika (Tigg), Macie (Cherries), Katelynn (Firecat), Ethias (Firedog), Haden (Firemonkey), Sharon (Freezing Rain), Lemia (Sketcher), and Zani (Flame), Talon (Ocelot), Alekai (Snow Leopard) She doesn’t meet her boyfriend, since she comes into Seraphimbia at least two to three years before she did in the core dimension, and thus was on a much higher level than him She isn’t a secret agent, and uses her aquakinesis a lot When Kylara goes through metamorphosis, she gets darkness powers as well as pyroaviakinesis powers, and becomes the Dark Phoenix Pitch stays a villain, and him and Kylara become and awesome evil couple with lots of evil metababies and team up with IIEM and SOS on occasion Everyone knows that Ice Queen and Frostbyte are twins, and both are heros Ice Queen is killed by Jay in an ice villain showdown Frostbyte then challenges her and is killed too Pitch high-fives her, since he hated his sisters, ever since their birth killed their mom, and since his dad doted on them and neglected him, which caused him to go to the dark side Since Violet was killed, her (non-existent) daughter isn’t able to make any changes to the future timeline, so this timeline is stuck, like the core dimension Talon and Alekai were raised together (Alekai goes by Alek in this dimension), and now they’re an unbreakable sibling duo Their parents were actually killed, and they never discover that they’re shifters, but they do have their shifter powers and weapons Seraphimbia never rescues Ten and Lucent (Sol), and they died of their gunshot wounds Because of this, Dom was never brought in to Seraphimbia, and thus stayed with SWORD until his real powers are revealed when he steals the powers of a very high-up SWORD official, and they confine him to a lab to experiment on him Also because of this, Blackshadow was never brought into this dimension, and no one knows about him or creation powers Seraphimbia is ruled by a council of five, not three Savage’s wife doesn’t die The members are Swanhawk, Nightdragon, Starwraith, Pyra, and Savage Nightdragon is replaced by Root Swanhawk is replaced by Tails Swanhawk is killed, and Pyra goes dark, teaming up with Starwraith and Savage to get revenge on her killer Nightdragon is stunned by his daughters’ death, and basically lets them do whatever Nightdragon eventually recovers from his shock, and tries to get Pitch to be a hero, forcing Pitch to be just like him, and Pitch ends up killing him. Realizing what he’s done, Pitch runs away and joins the IIEM (or SOS), along with Dark Phoenix, and they spend their lives trying not to get killed by Seraphimbia for killing one of their leaders Gena never joins Seraphimbia, she instead is recruited by the Shifter academy, so her and Talon never meet Talon doesn’t ‘die’, because the books don’t take place Talon never falls in love, and eventually dies alone Kyndra doesn’t meet Darknight, Darkling, Jay, and the crew until her team is sent to capture Pitch and Dark Phoenix and bring them back to Seraphimbia The capture mission is unsuccessful, and Kyndra and a few other end up getting captured instead Kyndra develops the smallest crush on Darknight, even though he’s twenty years older, and betrays Seraphimbia and her team to join the IIEM, finally realizing that she wants to be a villain, and that she doesn’t want to be controlled by Seraphimbia Bullutt defects as well, because he’s in love with Kyndra. The feeling is not mutual Whiplash defects from Seraphimbia because he finds out that a Seraphimbian agent had killed his parents when he was a kid, and didn’t tell him Seraphimbia then sends her old team after her, and they are unsuccessful, with multiple casualties This starts an IIEM/SOS v. Seraphimbia battle. The IIEM/SOS is always one step ahead in each encounter, thanks to Kyndra, Draike, and Kylara The three Seraphimbian defectents become great friends with the IIEM/SOS leaders Two of Jenebris and Drailara’s kids should fall in love Seraphimbia gets back at the defective agents by killing: Kyndra: Both of her brothers Her parents Tries to kill Mandy, which fails because of her new superpowers Dark Phoenix: Both of her brothers Her ‘sister’ Her closest friends Pitch: Since he has no remaining family (killed his father, his mother died in childbirth, jay killed his sisters, seraphimbia failed to rescue his cousins, and no one knows what happened to his aunt and uncle) Seraphimbia instead captures all of his non-powered friends and experiments on them, turning them into grotesque half-monster creatures that carry out Seraphimbia’s bidding, and send them after him He and Kylara left their eldest child, who was two at the time, with a friend, because they didn’t want her to have to be on the run, they wanted her to be safe. Yeah right. Bullutt: Blurr His parents His closest friends Whiplash His closest friends They do the same thing to his puppy, Digger, that they did to Pitch’s friends, except give him superpowers Talon is hacking into some things for Seraphimbia, when she finds some old emails or correspondences of some kind on a server. She reads them out of boredom, and instantly fall in love with the sender. She hacks into more stuff to find out more about this person (creepy, i know) and then tries to find the person irl. Three guesses who it is. Nika and the rest of the Shifters are recruited by the Shifter Academy what i totally did not just scroll down sorry kato |
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years Agowhat
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Re: Darkness Complete6 Years AgoSo get writing everyone! I don't think our characters interact for a while. OOH Maybe after the POV where Kyndra is 16, a Jay POV for what her life is like, and a Mandy POV that describes how she responds to all that stuff. And all the stuff with Kyndra going on with Jay POVS sprinkled in until we can timeskip to evil babies =D
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