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Deviant Timelines6 Years AgoI want there to be a timeline where Darknight is actually a siren (y'know, mind control powers and all that)
and of course the two sirens would be a couple i had a couple of ideas for things, but what do you guys think? like, maybe his mom was secretly a siren? |
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years AgoAlso I added a bunch, so here goes:
Kyndra still gets brain cancer and the cybernetics and the metal plate in her head, but doesn’t get depressed, since she has her friends The explosion that blew off her right arm doesn’t injure her, just reveals her aquakinesis Instead, Seraphimbia recruits her when she hacks into their network on a dare (Kyndra is a lot smarter in this dimension) and they catch her She gets sent on a mission in the middle of the ocean, and she discovers her siren powers when the bad guys try to drown her She goes down a weird good-evil vigilante path, not sure whether she wants to be evil or good She doesn’t have a hatred for SWORD, since Seraphimbia recruited her before SWORD killed her family Her and her brothers were recruited and formed a team of agents that went on the craziest most dangerous missions It consists of Kyndra (Aquasong), Napier (Scarr), Tornike (), Rick (Bullutt), Drew (Whiplash), Krister (Ambush), Natalie (Rocksy), Shika (Tigg), Macie (Cherries), Katelynn (Firecat), Ethias (Firedog), Haden (Firemonkey), Sharon (Freezing Rain), Lemia (Sketcher), Zani (Flame), Talon (Ocelot), and Alekai (Snow Leopard She doesn’t meet her boyfriend, since she comes into Seraphimbia at least two to three years before she did in the core dimension, and thus was on a much higher level than him She isn’t a secret agent, and uses her aquakinesis a lot When Kylara goes through metamorphosis, she gets darkness powers as well as pyroaviakinesis powers, and becomes the Dark Phoenix Pitch stays a villain, and him and Kylara become and awesome evil couple with lots of evil metababies and team up with IIEM and SOS on occasion Pitch doesn't get killed bc everything is different Everyone knows that Ice Queen and Frostbyte are twins, and both are heros Ice Queen is killed by Jay in an female ice villain showdown Frostbyte then challenges her and is killed too Pitch high-fives her, since he hated his sisters, ever since their birth killed their mom, and since his dad doted on them and neglected him, which caused him to go to the dark side Since Violet was killed, her (non-existent) daughter isn’t able to make any changes to the future timeline, so this timeline is stuck, like the core dimension Talon and Alekai were raised together (Alekai goes by Alek in this dimension), and now they’re an unbreakable sibling duo Their parents were actually killed, and they never discover that they’re Shifters, but they do have their Shifter powers and weapons Seraphimbia never rescues Ten and Lucent (Sol), and they died of their gunshot wounds Because of this, Dom was never brought in to Seraphimbia, and thus stayed with SWORD until his real powers are revealed when he steals the powers of a very high-up SWORD official, and they confine him to a lab to experiment on him Also because of this, Blackshadow was never brought into this dimension, and no one knows about him or creation powers Seraphimbia is ruled by a council of five, not three The members are Swanhawk, Nightdragon, Starwraith, Pyra, and Savage Nightdragon is replaced by Root Swanhawk is replaced Tails Swanhawk is killed, and Pyra goes dark, teaming up with Starwraith and Savage to get revenge on her killer Nightdragon is stunned by his daughters’ death, and basically lets them do whatever Nightdragon eventually recovers from his shock, and tries to get Pitch to be a hero, forcing Pitch to be just like him, and Pitch ends up killing him Realizing what he’s done, Pitch runs away and joins the IIEM (or SOS), along with Dark Phoenix, and they spend their lives trying not to get killed by Seraphimbia for killing one of their leaders Gena is recruited by the Shifter academy instead of joining Seraphimbia, so her and Talon never meet Talon doesn't 'die' bc the books never happen, she's there for the final battle Talon never falls in love, and eventually dies, still alone Kyndra doesn’t meet Darknight, Darkling, Jay, and the crew until her team is sent to capture Pitch and Dark Phoenix and bring them back to Seraphimbia The capture mission is unsuccessful, and Kyndra and a few other end up getting captured instead Kyndra develops the smallest crush on Darknight, even though he’s twenty years older, and betrays Seraphimbia and her team to join the IIEM, finally realizing that she wants to be a villain, and that she doesn’t want to be controlled by Seraphimbia Bullutt defects because he's in love with Kyndra. The feeling is not mutual Whiplash defects when he finds out that a Seraphimbian agent was the one that killed his parents, and Seraphimbia was never going to tell him Seraphimbia then sends her old team after her, and they are unsuccessful, with multiple casualties This starts and IIEM-SOS vs Seraphimbia battle. The IIEM/SOS are a step in each battle, thanks to Kyndra, Draike, and Kylara They end up becoming friends with all of the IIEM/SOS leaders O.O two of drailara and jenebris' kids should fall in love Seraphimbia gets back at the defective agents by killing: Both of her brothers Her parents Tries to kill Mandy, which fails because of her new superpowers Both of her brothers Her ‘sister’ Her closest friends Since he has no remaining family (killed his father, his mother died in childbirth, jay killed his sisters, seraphimbia failed to rescue his cousins, and no one knows what happened to his aunt and uncle) Seraphimbia instead captures all of his non-powered friends and experiments on them, turning them into grotesque half-monster creatures that carry out Seraphimbia’s bidding, and send them after him, forcing him to kill them or be killed by them Blurr His parents His closest friends His closest friends They do the same thing to his puppy, Digger, that they did to Pitch’s friends, except give him superpowers so what do you think? also what does peri think of her new powers? does she join SWORD, or the IIEM? |
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years AgoOh wow =D
I like all of those, and Jay would kill people in this dimension because she's super evil. Jenebris kids will be different though. I think it'll be shadow and light twins, like in the ninja-darknight losing control-secret govt group-dimension, but they survive in this one. ADDING, Please add this to the doc. Jay and Darkling's kids are twins, one has shadow manipulation, one has light manipulation. Both have telekinesis and technopathy. Shadow-twin becomes super evil and eventually takes over SOS when Jay and Darkling die (or are killed, which is more likely). Light-twin is driven by their powers to become good, joining whichever group is good guys but not the corrupted good guys. Maybe a truly-good subfaction of SWORD? The twins end up fighting a lot, but never actually kill each other. Light-twin is a girl, Shadow-twin is a boy. I still need to come up with names. Eventually Light-twin falls in love with someone, but Shadow-twin kills them (by accident or on purpose I don't know). Light-twin lapses into depression and goes into hiding, but doesn't die yet. Shadow-twin also falls in love, him and his girlfriend become the co-leaders of SOS (only after Jay+Darkling die though) and are super powerful. I'll add more later, please put those point on the deviant timeline doc. |
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years AgoAdd this too please. The guy Ciana falls in love with doesn't have powers, kinda like with Rayven and Oliver in the core timeline, except he isn't Oliver. That's why Kage could kill him by accident. The mysterious dead boyfriend is named Shon. Past that I don't know, but I don't think it will be relevant. The girl Kage falls in love with does have powers. She is known as Shadow Blade, and is a trained assassin. No one knows her real name, so Kage calls her Shado (which is actually a name). In reality, Shado never had a real name. She has umbrakinesis, which is part of the reason Kage was drawn to her. I'm taking back the parts about Kage taking over SOS. Kage and Shado create their own much more secret base deep in the mountains, and run a sort of under-the-radar assassin guild there. The base is virtually unbreachable, thanks to Kage's technopathic abilties. Alex was never a villain, so he never killed Volcrona. Kage allies himself and his organization with Volcrona, who helps protect their mountain base. Magma is still at SOS, and ends up one of the top villains, kind of a general for Jay and Darkling. Yeah, I'm totally writing all of this in a story. |
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years AgoAdded. Also:
Nika and the rest of the Shifters are recruited by the Shifter Academy Talon is hacking into some things for Seraphimbia, when she finds some old emails or correspondences of some kind on a server. She reads them out of boredom, and instantly fall in love with the sender. She hacks into more stuff to find out more about this person (creepy, i know) and then tries to find the person irl. Three guesses who it is. i changed this a bit: Seraphimbia gets back at the defective agents by killing:Kyndra:Both of her brothersHer parentsTries to kill Mandy, which fails because of her new superpowersDark Phoenix:Both of her brothersHer ‘sister’Her closest friendsPitch:Since he has no remaining family (killed his father, his mother died in childbirth, jay killed his sisters, seraphimbia failed to rescue his cousins, and no one knows what happened to his aunt and uncle) Seraphimbia instead captures all of his non-powered friends and experiments on them, turning them into grotesque half-monster creatures that carry out Seraphimbia’s bidding, and send them after himHe and Kylara left their eldest child, who was two at the time, with a friend, because they didn’t want her to have to be on the run, they wanted her to be safe. Yeah right.Bullutt:BlurrHis parentsHis closest friendsWhiplash They do the same thing to his puppy, Digger, that they did to Pitch’s friends, except give him superpowers Bullutt defects as well, because he’s in love with Kyndra. The feeling is not mutual Seraphimbia is ruled by a council of five, not three Savage’s wife doesn’t die The members are Swanhawk, Nightdragon, Starwraith, Pyra, and Savage Nightdragon is replaced by Root Swanhawk is replaced by Tails Swanhawk is killed, and Pyra goes dark, teaming up with Starwraith and Savage to get revenge on her killer |
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years AgoOkay cool =)
Trying to figure out hero/villain names for Kage and his sister. |
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years AgoCool
also mad pointed out that all of this happened because "one flaky kid didnt run in a track meet" |
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years AgoIt's kinda funny, because SWORD, Swift, and Project Z (plus Agent 12) were all Chloe's idea. Without even realizing it, we made it so that almost none of what made our characters who they are would've happened if Chloe's character hadn't run the race.
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years Agowow XD that's great
hey how about mad and i post our chapters on a different thread in this group? |
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years AgoSure.
Okay here we go, more to add: Kage's villain name is Umber (you know, umbrakinesis) and Ciana's hero name is Mirror. Jay get's an EPIC uniform that Darkling makes for her (his technopathic powers are much more advanced) and she gets that cool looking sword you had the picture drawn for (also from Darkling). Basically the uniform is made of carbon-laced vibranium, and is a scale-weave bodysuit that covers most of her neck, and down to her wrists and ankles. It can collapse into a necklace. There are bands on her neck, wrists, and ankles that light up blue when connected to her power signature. There are also shoes and gloves of the same material that connect to the wrist and ankle bands. The pendant for the necklace is also a glowing light like the bands, that sits on her collarbone. Her wings are part of it, and the suit is designed to respond to tiny cues that her body gives of her intentions. Her gloves and shoes are super-gripping, and the shoes are sound absorbing. Darkling stole cool tech from the I.I.E.M. that is contact lenses that act like cybernetic vision. They protect the wearer's eyes and also let them see in the dark, have heat sensing vision, and see through certain materials. They can calculate distance and time, but don't connect to the internet unfortunately. Jay gets a pair with her uniform. Jay's sword was made by Darkling as well, the blue lines in the drawing you posted are like the bands and pendant on her uniform and react to her power signature. I like this dimension better than the core dimension, at least when it comes to my characters =D Let me know if that's too overpowering for technology... I don't think it is but... I came up with this while trying to fall asleep last night. |
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years Agocan you put that info on the darkness complete thread
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years AgoUm we don't need to have it posted twice right??
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years Agoyeah nevermind
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years Agoyeah nevermind
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years Agoalrighty then
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years AgoThis thread died =D
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years Ago yes it did
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years Agoto revive this thread, i will say that you guys should come see the wizard of oz.
opening night was yesterday, today there's one from 7 to 9, there's 2 on saturday, 1 that starts at 2 and another that starts at 7. next week: on thursday and friday at 7, and saturday at 2 and 7. YOU GUYS SHOULD COME IM IN PIT YALL COULD SEE MEE |
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Re: Deviant Timelines6 Years Agouh
i can't we have stuff going on |
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