Songwriters & Lyricists Forum Welcome!

HI! Welcome! Thank you for joining me! I hope this group grows, but if not, we will still make it a great group! let's plan on future contests and such.
Post whatever you want in the Forum here. ::smile::

Chrissy

Hey. First, thanks for the invite. Second, I think it's supposed to be "lyricists". And, a good way to advertise is to post often in the forum about the group. If you post, they will come. :P

Geez! you're right! I knew that! Just created it at the end of a LONG work day!
LOL
thank you for telling me!

Chrissy :)

You're welcome. I've done the same thing before. Don't worry. ::smile::

Here is a little something I started awhile back...it's OK, but not the greatest. It needs some work..some changes. Anyone want to help? Add or change anything? I have a TON of these...little bits and pieces of songs/lyrics that never went far. maybe as a group we can combine stuff and create something outstanding? ::smile::


As i wipe away the tears in my eyes
i wish to god i didnt love you
if i could feel nothing like I did before you
I would
Its true

I was fine without feeling a thing
like a solid piece of ice
i was hard and cold
then you came along
and now im paying the price

I dont want to love you
and have to watch you go away
why did you let me need you
when you knew you couldnt stay?

I had it all figured out
I was safe behind my walls of doubt
but you broke right thru
made it fall apart
and now I have to deal with
this broken heart

while you walk away
so much i wanna say
your eyes hold the pain
as mine drip like rain
why
did you have to let me need you?
now as I have to watch you walk away
why did you make me want you
when you knew you wouldnt stay?

my soul is broken
itll never be ok
why did you make me love you
when you knew
you always knew
you couldnt stay?