So You're Writing a Novel Forum Honest reviews & positive crit..

in that i totally agree i want honest reviews and positive criticism !

Sorry, I was using my phone and it let my put the postinh, but not the body, which was weird. I have a prologue that I would like some feedback from. Just some old fashioned honest criticism.  I already had 4 ppl review me and they loved it and can't wait for my chapter 1, but I'm a bit of a perfectionist and feel that something is missing, if anything. Help a brotha out!

I meant to review my Rise of the Dead Proplogue and let me know if I'm missing anything. If you relate to the character in any way

ohh will do !:) but just to tell you im not much of a reviewer and critique