Sci Fi & Fantasy Writers at the Table Forum Wing Commander Rising Day Stor..

Hello, everyone. Hope Christmas was great for everybody and wishing a Happy New Year as well. I have a project I have been working on ( Wing Commander Rising Day Storm) I'm hoping to get some feed back on as if it's a good story and so. It's my first attempt at writing so there are some errors which i hope will be overlooked. My main goal and still is, is to get it completed, but still have a way's to go. But it is a Sci-Fi, Fantasy and I hope it's enjoyable for everyone. Thanks.