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"Love" to hear your thoughts!

10 Years Ago


I'd love to hear your thoughts on my piece "A Whisper to the Moon" Please comment on my profile but I'll also post here for convenience.

My heart is shoutingI love youBut my head objectsSays it’s too soon
So I step outsideAnd whisper it to the moon
Head says it’s too earlyAll in good timeGive her spaceGive her roomSo I here insteadWhispering to the moon
Temper enthusiasmWith patienceHead says to heartWrite a little tuneGo outside andSing it to the moon
I have these silly rules The stupid gamesWe have to playWhat a cartoon I must appear to beSinging to the moon
But my heart it yearnsFor a word, a touchEmotions ready to burstTaught like a full balloonThe only release of pressureAre whispers to the moon
And so I waitIn patient agonyThe the time to comeI hope it comes soonI’ll be showing you this insteadOf whispering it to the moon