Realistic Fantasy Forum Ku'uipo

Here is one of my poems not everyone likes it but its my first poem posted on here also is this were we post our work
  Ku’uipo   I kiss my Ku’uipo   I can feel my Ku’uipo warm chest   And feel my Ku’uipo heart beat   Under the evenings suns heat   Above the ocean blue   Were a soul in one my Ku’uipo and me   Forever till the nights end   For Ku’uipo means My love