Qonos' Forum Project 1 : The Message

This is now a joint project between
Ravenskald/Pete (Novel)
and Silvermoon/Wy (Screenplay)
If your interested please see the folllowing URLS

ALL first drafts

opening
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Notes (Novel)

Chapter 1 the Fall of Loki

Silently Whispered, a prequel
The evolution of Alsav (The Wolf)

Canto 2 Raido Loki and Skadi Meet

Manez = Man, The Journeyman

Thanks for this, Pete. I do need the orders of your novel. :)

I will check them out here more often so I will not get lost.

Wy,
Firstly thanks a lot for your input
can you post the urls of the screenplay here as they come out
so we can both keep track !
we could end up with 2 different stories ;(

Leave Manez, not sure where this goes, not sure what is up there at the moment fits into a screenplay anyway , a chapter may be 5 mins in a screenplay, this section looks like a cut.
Even when i've finished writing it !

Pete

Okay. I will put the urls here after posting it.

I am referring mostly to your story and changed and cut a little on the dialogues but I want to make sure that the essence of the story is still there.

Yeah, maybe we might end up in to different stories. Hehehe!! Still working on the second scene.

first draft of the 2nd scene

 

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REMINDERS FOR MYSELF:

 

for tomorrow until friday:

Silently Whispered, a prequel
The evolution of Alsav (The Wolf)

 

On Saturday and Sunday

Canto 2 Raido Loki and Skadi Meet

 

On Monday

/ Manez = Man, The Journeyman

is amazing, very nice tidy and edit
love the scenes, love the directions, love the whole thing !

~Raving  ! ;-)