Project: Writer Forum Working Group - 2

Rylan Batten - "Six Counts & Death"
Vicky Ann Smith - "The Database"
Natalia - "Living in Fear"
Adam Evans - "Crash"
Shaun Hardy - "Hey Little Buddy..."

Just wanted to say howdy to the folks of group #2. Just to be specific for my story, "Hey Little Buddy... (Pt. 1)" is my featured story. Please be as critical and harsh as you can, I'm a big boy, I can take it.

I will be reading and re-reading each of your pieces over these next few days and hopefully by the end of the weekend I will have a really well thought out review (and hopefully helpful) for each of you. I do have to let you know up front, I am typically very positive in my reviews. I've always been the type of person to encourage people to go further and expand on their abilities.

shaun

You know what sucks... you spend a ton of time on a review, outlining all sorts of different things and then the story takes off and then there are a ton of reviews - all briefly stating what you spent so much time going through and doing yourself.

darn.

Anyways, Adam, I have a super long review for your story coming at you.

Hi,

I've put 'The Database' as my featured story now. I'm working nights all this week but I look forward to reading and reviewing your stories over the next week.

Vicky X

I just wanted to apologize for the delay in my reviews. I have finished Adam's last week and just posted Rylan's today. I will be working to finish Vicky's and Natalia's within the next day or two.

Off to do more now.

Hi,

I've still got Natalia's and Adam's left and will be posting them over the weekend.

Vicky X