Popcorn Writing Forum All Hollow's Eave

"Welcome to hell!" a voice shouted as music in the backgrounded blaired. I could hear  Distorted guitar shouting as the flames arose, and I saw  women bairly covered seductively dancing from outside the gates. "Is the heaven, or hell?" I wondered stepping into the gates

He felt himself being groped... Definitely Heaven, he thought at once.
"Wouldn't be too sure..." a voice whispered in his head. Who was that? Oh well, it didn't matter anyway. Suddenly, he dropped to his knees and screamed. The woman behind him who had been groping him laughed. He turned around and to his horror, he saw what was coming out of the woman's hands. Fire. He got up and ran, only to bump into another naked woman.
"Shhh, don't worry," she whispered. "I'm not one of them, I'm in Hell, too... Come on, I know a hiding place..."