Popcorn Writing Forum Doors
Doors12 Years AgoThe seventh stair creaks, he knew that much. He leaps ever so slightly over it.
No noise, he begs. The corridor was poorly lit, perfect for wandering around when you're not supposed to be. Which door was it? The third? The brass handle gleams, twinkling with the secrets harbored behind it. A keyhole stops him in his tracks. He reaches for the handle, praying... The door swings open. |
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Re: Doors12 Years AgoThe scent of whiskey and blood potruded sharply with the wind harbored by the swinging door.
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Re: Doors12 Years Ago Looking behind him he shuts the door from his pursuers and looks around the room. The room was a dark balck and he could see a faint trace of ripped paintings and an old victorian four poster bed. The gray sheets ripped apart. "Hello?" He called in a raspy voice.
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Re: Doors12 Years AgoIn the corner... came the replying whisper.
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Re: Doors12 Years AgoHe peered into the musty corner and saw a gir croutching there, dark hair strewn across her face. SHe was deathly white and frail. The look of defience shone clear in her eyes with something else he couldn't put hs finger on. He didn't know who she was...but she seemed off somehow. A shudder ran through him
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Re: Doors12 Years Ago"Are you my friend?" she asks in a soft innocent voice that didn't match up with her eyes at all. The hairs on the back of his neck prickled with the silent feeling of someone else watching them.
"Are you my friend?" the girl repeats. |
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Re: Doors12 Years Ago
The man looks down upon the petit frail girl, only
asking, “Where did you come from? Are you alright?” The dark haired girl only
looks at the man with dark, baggy eyes, showing she had no sleep for a couple
of days strait.
“Are you my
friend?” She asked once more.
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Re: Doors12 Years AgoThe man crouched down beside her, studying her,"Are you my friend?" Her voice was growing frailer with each time she repeated the question.
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Re: Doors12 Years Ago"How long have you been here?" he tries again to find out more about the girl.
"Are you my friend?" she replies over again. Finally he gives in and answers her question. "Yes, I am your friend." |
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Re: Doors12 Years Ago"Please..." she begged in a broken whisper, expression softening to match her voice. The man looked at her with a mixture of pity and confusion. His arm stretched out to her. Just then a large BANG! SOunded. The girl jumped in fright, her eyes darting, alarmed, to the door.
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Re: Doors12 Years Agohe is here she says frighted.
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Re: Doors12 Years Ago"Who is here?" he asks.
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Re: Doors12 Years Agothe door busted open. the girl screamed. the guy jumped up. and looked at the door frighted. him she said pionting at nothing .but an open door
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Re: Doors12 Years Ago A man appeared behind him. He had a creepy smile on his face and a crimson stained knife in his meaty hand. "Emily, who's your new friend?" He asked in a hypnotic, sing-song voice
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Re: Doors12 Years AgoThe girl shakes her head as if on strings, muttering, "No, no.." like a broken record.
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Re: Doors12 Years Agowhats going on the guy said.
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Re: Doors12 Years AgoRising, as if lifted by unseen spirits, the young, pale, frail child floated towards the ceiling only to return midair upright, staring with luminescent eyes awaiting for another soul to overtake her
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Re: Doors12 Years Ago"No!!" She shrieked, thrashing against the invisible hands. "I can't leave him! Help me!! Help Oh God please!"
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Re: Doors12 Years AgoAs if ten doors were shutting one after the other, the room became ice cold. With their breath, the impression of an apparition appeared with a grin and a high-pitched cackle.
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Re: Doors12 Years AgoThe girl went silent. A horrible sense of foreboading entered the mans heart as he caught the terror alight in her eyes
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