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What do you guys think of this poem and be honest?6 Years AgoIn the Still of Night
Written by Adam M. Snow
Take me away in the still of night,
but if you may - despite
how forthright,
to incite;
oh, to slay
a masterful,
that which is plentiful;
a song so full of light.
So, I say, take me
before the dawn of day,
cast astray.
Take me,
oh, my sirens of the sea,
that I may break free
of my prison bars,
my eternity,
my downright wretched to be,
my fallen knight.
Take me, out of sight
and I shall not fight,
for I have been cast out
without a doubt,
without a plea
to save me,
from that which I am bound,
to scat
like a rat,
but with no sound.
Oh, take me down the river Styx,
where I quiver
and shiver,
be a sliver of tricks.
Take me, in the still of night
and in return shall I take flight.
I'll flutter,
without utter,
nor shall I mutter
in such an awful plight.
I'll hang there,
lest my noose be lowered;
tis be fare,
as time move forward.
I'll wait and see,
through eternity,
that which shall be,
in the still of night
if be your might,
to take me
where journey yonder,
where I slumber,
in do so, I wander,
even to the depth of sea.
Oh, take me.
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