Novels & Short Stories Forum It took 4 years

New to this site and have fianlly realized that there is no point writing without sharing. I am here to share, to learn and to support other people who are writers, regardless of their age, gender or profession. I love reading stories and am happy to offer constructive xriticism and honesty. BTW I am a teacher so please excuse the 'two stars and a wish' format of my reivews! 

I have recently sunbmitted the first chapter of a book called 'The Crash' and would welcome your feedback.