Novels & Short Stories Forum Novel, Female Protagonist, loo..

I am looking to exchange reviews with someone also working with a female protagonist.

Hi, Nutmeg, if you still need review partners, I'd be privileged to exchange ideas about our work.  I read the first chapter of Wendy and enjoyed it very much.  I liked your descriptions, and starting out with the song (which I also like, BTW) was a great touch.  I also appreciate the care you obviously put into editing your work.  For those reasons I definitely would like to read on!

I have a book on WC (Share My Dreams With Me) that might qualify although it has both a male and female protagonist and shifts between their POVs.  I'm fairly pleased with, and have gotten some good comments on, the first few chapters, although I would appreciate feedback on the middle chapters, which maybe aren't up to the standards of the rest.  The book is definitely adult because of sexual situations, but I like to think a lot of love comes through in those situations.  If there is an exception, the scene is there to explain the past in comparison to the present.

Hey, I am also writing a novel with female protagonist and I could review your writing if you did likewise. I wanted some actual feed back. I just posted the first chapter here. The name is "Arcadia: The Tale of the Tower". You could check it out if you want.

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