Novel Writers For Novel Writers Forum Young readers wanted!

Hey!
I've been writing a novel directed toward preteens and younger teens. Anyone can read it, but I would be particularly thrilled if any members out there who are say, between 12 and 15 would read my story Saving Bithenar. Since it is aimed at that age group, I just want to know what you'd like to see more of, less or, or what I'm doing right.
Any advice is appreciated, thanks! ::biggrin::

I'll pass it on to my daughter who's on this site, and to my boys who like to read. Any feedback you get will be sure to include the name and age of the reviewer.

My daughter is 12, I'll give this to her to read, but I couldn't find that title on your writerscafe page.

Sorry!
Its actually named "Prologue - Ch.3 Saving Bithenar (tentative title)" and "Ch.4 - Ch.7 Saving Bithenar (tentative title)" They ere amung the first things I added, so you will have to go to stories then view all
Thanks!

yea I'll take a look at the whole thing if you want...I'll send somethin back to you for the same age group if you'd like as well.

Sweet. I'll put it on my 93-piece-long reading list. lol.