Midnight Writers Forum Well

I'm a midnight writer, or a mid morning.. whatever the time, usually never at a time where others are around... anyway. I'd really like it if you could just give me some reviews on my stuff, I really want JUST helpful advice. I am not new to writing, but I have little or no actual education in writing. Never spent the time in school, always been getting fucked up, and staying fucked up. That won't change. NUMB it all, but when I feel it at it's strongest i write.. Some times I'll admit I didn't feel it as much as other times, but that was the more recent "Girl" that I just added this morning for another girl. Trying to explain in my head how to help her. Just turned into some what of a rhyme. Left it, and posted it. Anyway.