Lonely Writers Blog Group Forum Updates (again)

okay I'm on the last leg of DC crits for the first FULL critique i got. I'm hoping maybe a couple more people will read v.1 and give me feed back on the whole novel, then move onto v.2 i think after v.2 the book should be ready for Pauline to pull apart.



I still have as yet to start AMS (waiting for hubby to refill the ink as usual but i might start it tonight without printing. probably will annoy me though.)



I started a new novel (no you're eyes are not deceiving you) called Blood Brothers. Ill post the synopsis here and you guys can tell me how ridiculous of an idea it is. Actually i like where i'm thinking of going with this. Here's the synopsis:





Blood Brothers-synopsis



Marlene had everything; a loving husband, a beautiful young daughter named Rhonda, and a budding career as a travel journalist. Then one day, as she began her flight towards the Florida peninsula to meet her family, until a tragic plane crash prevents her from getting there. She wakes up in a strange place, finding out that it�s a mental institution being told her husband put her there, and took their daughter where she wouldn�t be able to find them. Stunned she spends four years wondering what she did to be placed in there, and to lose her family; her last memory being on a plane, a nightmare that refuses to leave her. After being drugged by the nurse, she wakes two days later to find a man, whom she never met before standing there. She learns that he�s her husband�s long lost brother, not realizing he means simply a blood brother, not a real brother. Once moved to his room within the institution she begins to learn the deadly secret that put her there, and what her husband�s �blood brother� intends to do with her. Her only hope is that her husband finds her in time and saves her before he can complete his plan.



Marcus was devastated the day he lost his wife. Packing up the stuff from their house, he takes his young daughter away hoping to start fresh away from the pain of her death. He seemed to be doing well, even started sleeping fully through the night. But four years later, he receives a startling letter, and realizes that he had been wrong. He never thought Vincent was serious about him giving his first wife as a sacrifice to the brotherhood, but soon learned he really meant business. Hiding his daughter safely away, he makes his way to where the letter states, willing to do whatever it took to save his wife and take Vincent out of the picture once and for all.



Okay thats that. SuperMarket horror is getting revised tonight as well i hope. Well see though. :)



lol thats my updates. if there's more ill add them if not well then ill have more later. Talk to ya.

Sounds like a great idea for a story.  Full of mystery, romance and action.  XX