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Vincent Weathers	experimental. Ensnared 17 Years Ago In threads of spider silk/you sow promise and deciet Hope to belief/I got stuck and I cannot escape now you display/the fool I become/now in a mental retreat I struggle/yearn to break free/ In your eyes/is the discontent I see/ Here is I stay/beckoning silent cries/ To collect dust/wait for the spider to bring my demise Now I see the empty corpses/beside in lumps of gray Empty they were/like the promises you say If I known the snare/would be at the end I would/withdraw/emotionally rend Instead I am stuck/snared in your web But I now know/I am not the only one/but it don't end
Vincent Weathers	[no subject] 17 Years Ago What? No one even bothered to reply? What kind of people are you? Trailer trash? (I felt like saying that word) Great. Largely ignored--if I just try something new.
Fantasyfairy	[no subject] 17 Years Ago I liked it. It's an interesting concept and one I think about all the time. I have a lot of spiders that live in our house with us, and though I don't mind them being around, their homes are a bit gross sometimes. LOL. Still, I didn't have any problems with flies in the summer, so I guess I can give them some slack.
Vincent Weathers	[no subject] 17 Years Ago Originally posted by Fantasyfairy I liked it. It's an interesting concept and one I think about all the time. I have a lot of spiders that live in our house with us, and though I don't mind them being around, their homes are a bit gross sometimes. LOL. Still, I didn't have any problems with flies in the summer, so I guess I can give them some slack. I used Spiders and webs as sensory imagery. Used in a metaphorical sense. Spiders are interesting, still a bit creepy. I would have a major phobia for spiders if I had come across some the size of dogs or the size of an elephant. Ooh. You won't question me if I walk around with a sword to my side every minute if those things existed.
T.k. Sutter	[no subject] 17 Years Ago It's very visual - full of imagery! And with the spiders - it freaks me out because I do have a spider phobia haha.