Inspired Insomniacs Forum Disabled-poem feedback please
Disabled-poem feedback please16 Years AgoI dream awake in sleepless nights. Thoughts haunting my busy mind, Love too stubborn to confess, Closing my eyes and seeing only one face, The one that so deeply haunts my pounding heart, Have we lost balance, Pushed over the edge, Fell with no arms to reach one another, No grasp to hold onto what we can't control, Will I meet you at the end, Will you grasp my hand, Silence is ironically all we speak, I cannot shout it to you, Honesty makes the heart grow fonder, I never asked for your absence, I only asked for the truth, But your truth is blind and deaf, Disabled by your fear, When will you release your heart, Will you makr yourself a moblie. |
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[no subject]16 Years AgoI thought this was really very pretty.
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[no subject]16 Years AgoTruly nicely done. I'm sure most of us, especially in this group, can find parellels in our own life.
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[no subject]16 Years AgoThis was really very nice and seems to fit the theme of the group. |
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[no subject]16 Years Agoi really liked this! my favorite has to be the first couple lines
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