I Love Haikus! Forum Hot Potato Haiku

This is how this game is played. I will start the first line of haiku and you must write the next line. And we keep going to we have to start all over again. First line:



"Unbrindled beauty"


Okay, now it's YOUR turn!

"Unbrindled beauty"
"Take my hand and have my heart"

"Unbrindled beauty"
"Take my hand and have my heart"
"And Then we shall dance"

"Unbrindled beauty"
"Take my hand and have my heart"
"And Then we shall dance"

OH! Cat, I love that! :) We should keep it! Since not many other people are playing, I am starting another...

Here it is:

"Cupped in my hand's palm"

I guess I'll give it a go!

"Cupped in my hands palm
A bead of sweat settles in"

Cupped in my hand's palm
a bead of sweat settles in
a puddle of fear


OMG...this IS really fun!

Okay who is next????

This is too fun. I've got a first line.

Feather drifting low

Feather drifting low
caressing the earth gently

Feather drifting low
caressing the earth gently
Season's bitter end

Oh, that was a perfect haiku guys!!!

Okay, here we go again:


a midsummer's breeze

ok i am still new at these but here it goes


a midsummer's breeze
Innocence lost forever

a midsummer's breeze
Innocence lost forever
but pleasure is found.

WOW...that was beautiful!!! You guys are ripping it up in here!!! LMAO


Here we go again:



sing sing humming bird

sing sing humming bird
forever free from beauty

Ok I am starting the next one:

Prepare yourself now

Sing sing hummingbird
Forever free from beauty
Song from the prison

Prepare yourself now
for the end is very near

Prepare yourself now
for the end is very near
love while you still can

This is actually a lot of fun!!! :) Here is the start of another!!!!

Delight is simple

Delight is simple
explode from your thick, dark shell